Persuasive Essay Practice
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In this blog post you will be able to find two articles that explain the importance of English in the medical field. Enjoy your reading!
WHAT IS THE ROLE OF ENGLISH LANGUAGE IN MEDICINE
This short article explains the importance of knowing English for physicians. Also, it presents how communication with patients is primordial for healthcare worker. Actually, communicating with patient and collegues is of paramount importance. That is why fluently speaking English is an asset in the medical field. A small error of communication can lead to a lot of damage for a sick patient. Moreover, English is the most spoken language around the globe so it is important to understand and speak it in order to collaborate with other healthcare workers. I strongly encourage you to read this article since it was interesting.
IMPORTANCE OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE IN MEDICINE
This article named six reasons why healthcare workers should be able to communicate in English, such as the fact that it allows them to improve their skills since they can read articles and research that are done by other doctors that are often written in English. Moreover, knowing English allows physicians to participate to medical conferences which can be useful as a doctor. I will let you read the rest of the article to discover other reasons why it is important for doctors to speak in English and understand this language.
Sources:
OKOMEDS, What is the Role of English Language in Medicine, (site consulted on October 30th), [Online], https://www.okomeds.com/what-is-the-role-of-english-language-in-medicine/
Importance of the English Language in Medicine, (site consulted on October 30th), [Online], https://web.snauka.ru/en/issues/2017/02/78089
Picture: FLUENCYCORP, The Hardest Thing About Learning English as a Second Language, (site consulted on October 30th), [Online], https://fluencycorp.com/the-hardest-things-about-learning-english-as-a-second-language/
Noémie, you've scored a point there. Indeed, English is nearly mandatory for healthcare workers. Your articles sure seem interesting and quite relevant to anyone working in the medical field. Thank you so much for sharing!
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- verb tense (explained): two articles that explained the importance of English
- Try to use complex sentences by adding details to some of the information provided and avoid the overuse of the same structure, especially the overuse of pronouns (i.e.: It says ... It talks...): It says that as a doctor it is important to communicate with colleagues and patients. It is important to be understood when talking in English. It says that a small error of communication can lead to a lot of damages. It also talks...
- review the use of commas as a whole
- remove period and replace by comma: This article named six reasons why healthcare workers should be able to communicate in English. Such as the fact...
- Be careful, you switch from 'healthcare workers' to 'you'. Stick with one of them please.
- reformulate this last part of your sentence, as it sounds as if the doctors are the ones who are written in English ;) - done by other doctors that are often written in English
- plural (articles): the rest of the articles